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goods dept spreads: second drafts



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ThoughtsOnTheRun said...

The head might be better placed below the text. Her eye is directing your attention up and to the right, which might be useful to direct the attention of the reader towards? cool pictures. I think she's going to skewer the raccoon cause her marshmallow blew up in her face.

4.11.07

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